Monday, January 30, 2012


Hacker Review of Clear Sentence

8-1 Active vs. passive verbs
Although this exercise was not helpful to me, it's still a good exercise to review.
8-2 Active vs. be verbs
I  already understand the difference between active and be verbs.
8-3 Active verbs (edit and compare).
 This exercise helped me learn how to add active words into sentences.
9-1 Parallelism
This part  helped me understand how to write better sentences.
 9-2 Parallelism
This part does not really helpful, but it's still a good reminder.
9-3 Parallelism
These exercises helped me to know when to add preposition correctly.
10-1 10-2  Needed words
This part taught me how to avoid adding some meaning less words.
11-1 Mixed constructions.
This part taught me how to avoid adding some words which are not neccessary.
11-2 Mixed constructions  (edit and compare)
This part taught me how to avoid adding some words which are not neccessary.
12-1 Misplaced modifiers
As an international student, I sometimes use modifiers wrong. This part helped me a lot.
12-2 Misplaced modifiers  (edit and compare)
These examples reinforce the content in 12-1.
12-3 Dangling modifiers
This helped me learn how to express my ideas completely in sentences.
12-4 Dangling modifiers  (edit and compare)
This part let me have more exercises to practice dangling modefiers.
13-1 Shifts: person and number
It's a easy part. I already understand shifts.
13-2 Shifts: tense
This part wasn't helpful  because I already understand shifts.
13-3 Shifts
This part wasn't helpful  because I already understand shifts.
13-4 Shifts  (edit and compare)
This part is more helpful than the previous three parts.It was a little difficult.
 14-1 Choppy sentences
 I did this exercise with my group.It does not very helpful.
14-2 Choppy sentences  (edit and compare)
 I did this exercise with my group.It does not very helpful.
14-3 Subordination
This is a easy part and  I did this exercise with my group.I did not  learn much from it.

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